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廣東卷2015年高考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分作文(六篇)
第一節(jié)基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作(共1小題，滿(mǎn)分15分)
【作文題目】你接受了一項(xiàng)寫(xiě)作任務(wù)，為英語(yǔ)校報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇科技報(bào)道。
【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息，介紹國(guó)外醫(yī)療行業(yè)出現(xiàn)的一項(xiàng)新技術(shù)，內(nèi)容包括：
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技術(shù)名稱(chēng)：DNA檢測(cè) 檢測(cè)方法：唾液樣本分析 檢測(cè)費(fèi)用：125英鎊 檢測(cè)時(shí)長(zhǎng)：4到6周 檢測(cè)用途： 1. 預(yù)測(cè)重大疾病 2. 預(yù)知食物偏好 3. 提示合適的鍛煉方式 檢測(cè)影響： 1. 增強(qiáng)健康意識(shí) 2. 易引起過(guò)度焦慮 |
*唾液樣本：saliva sample
【寫(xiě)作要求】
只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。
范文1：
A new study appeared in the foreign medical field where researchers completed a project called DNA Test. Researchers have made great progress in the study which depends on analyzing a person’s saliva sample. If you would like to have a try, you will have to spend 125 pounds and the analysis will be completed in 4 to 6 weeks. The result will help to predict some major and severe diseases and your preference for diet and remind you of suitable ways to exercise. When it comes to the effect, it will help you to enhance the sense of keeping fit but it may cause you to be overly anxious.
譯文：
國(guó)外醫(yī)學(xué)領(lǐng)域出現(xiàn)了一項(xiàng)新的研究，研究人員完成了一個(gè)叫做脫氧核糖核酸(DNA)的測(cè)試項(xiàng)目。這項(xiàng)研究取決于一個(gè)人的唾液樣本分析，研究人員已在該研究中取得了長(zhǎng)足的進(jìn)步。如果你想嘗試一下此測(cè)試項(xiàng)目，你將必需花費(fèi)125磅，其分析過(guò)程將在4到6個(gè)星期內(nèi)完成。其結(jié)果將有助于預(yù)測(cè)一些重大疾病，以及你的飲食偏好，并提醒你合適的鍛煉方式。其測(cè)試效果會(huì)幫助你提升強(qiáng)身健體的意識(shí)，但它可能會(huì)導(dǎo)致你過(guò)度焦慮。
范文2：
Recently a new technology, DNA test, has turned up in the foreign medical industry. This kind of DNA test is made by analyzing saliva sample, lasting four to six weeks, which will cost 125 pounds. As is said, this DNA test mainly aims to predict some serious diseases, foresee one’s food preference as well as suggest some suitable ways of exercise. According to the technology, there are some good influences, such as improving people’s sense of health. However, it may also lead to too much anxiety among people if people receive the test.
譯文：
最近國(guó)外醫(yī)療行業(yè)出現(xiàn)了一項(xiàng)新技術(shù)——DNA檢測(cè)。這種DNA檢測(cè)是通過(guò)分析唾液樣本進(jìn)行的，其費(fèi)用為125英鎊，檢測(cè)時(shí)間持續(xù)4到6周。該檢測(cè)的主要用途是預(yù)測(cè)重大疾病，預(yù)知食物偏好以及提示合適的鍛煉方式。這一科技內(nèi)容，它有好的方面，例如增強(qiáng)健康意識(shí);但是一旦人們接受了這項(xiàng)測(cè)試，它也會(huì)導(dǎo)致人們過(guò)度焦慮。
范文3：
DNA Detection
We can use saliva sample to detect whether people have major illnesses, predict whether people are particular about food and remind people to take proper exercise. People should pay 125 pounds for it. It takes four to six weeks to finish the report. After detection we can realize we should strengthen our bodies. It may cause too many worries.
譯文：
DNA檢測(cè)
我們可以用唾液樣本來(lái)檢測(cè)人們是否有重大疾病，預(yù)測(cè)人們是否對(duì)食物比較挑剔，提醒人們進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)腻憻挕Ｈ藗儜?yīng)該為該項(xiàng)檢測(cè)支付125英鎊。需要四到六個(gè)星期完成報(bào)告。檢測(cè)后，我們可以意識(shí)到我們應(yīng)該加強(qiáng)我們的身體。它可能會(huì)導(dǎo)致過(guò)多的擔(dān)憂(yōu)。
第二節(jié) 讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)(共1小題，滿(mǎn)分25分)
【作文題目】閱讀下面短文，然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
On the first day of her work, Sally found that a class full of problems was waiting for her. Six teachers had quit before her. When she walked into the classroom, it was chaos: two boys were fighting in the far corner, yet the rest of the class seemed not to notice them; some girls were chatting and some were running about; paper, food packages and other garbage were littered around…. Just when she was about to speak, a student rushed in and pushed her aside! He was twenty minutes late!
Sally walked onto the platform, picked up a piece of chalk and wrote on the blackboard: “Rule 1: We are family!” All students stopped to look at her. And she continued with Rule 2, Rule 3… In the following weeks, Sally worked out 10 class rules and posted them on the walls of the classroom. She patiently explained all the rules to the students and required everyone to follow them.
Surprisingly, Sally was not driven out like the former teachers; instead, she won respect from the students. Over the year, she witnessed gradual change in the class. At the graduation ceremony, just as she expected, she was very proud to stand with a class of care, manners and confidence.
題目譯文：
在薩莉工作的第一天，她發(fā)現(xiàn)一個(gè)充滿(mǎn)問(wèn)題的班級(jí)在等著她。已有六位老師在她之前辭職了。當(dāng)她走進(jìn)教室時(shí)，教室里混亂不堪：兩個(gè)男孩在遠(yuǎn)角打架，但班上的其余學(xué)生似乎沒(méi)有注意到他們;有些女孩在聊天，有些人跑來(lái)跑去;紙、食品包裝和其它垃圾被扔得到處都是。就在她正要說(shuō)話(huà)的時(shí)候，一個(gè)學(xué)生沖進(jìn)來(lái)，把她推到了一邊!他遲到了二十分鐘!
薩莉走到講臺(tái)上，拿起一支粉筆，在黑板上寫(xiě)下到：“規(guī)則1：我們是一家人!”所有的學(xué)生都停下來(lái)看著她。她繼續(xù)寫(xiě)規(guī)則2、規(guī)則3……。在接下來(lái)的幾周里，薩利制定出了10條班規(guī)，并把它們貼在教室的墻上。她耐心地向?qū)W生們解釋了所有的規(guī)則，并要求每個(gè)人都遵循這些規(guī)則。
令人驚訝的是，薩莉并沒(méi)有像以前的老師那樣被趕走。相反，她贏得了學(xué)生們的尊敬。在過(guò)去的一年里，她目睹了課堂上的逐漸變化。正如她所期待的那樣，在畢業(yè)典禮上，她非常自豪地和一個(gè)具有關(guān)心、禮貌和自信的班級(jí)站在一起。
【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】
1.用約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。
2.用約120個(gè)詞就班規(guī)談?wù)勀愕南敕�，�?nèi)容包括：
(1) 你們班最突出的問(wèn)題是什么?
(2) 針對(duì)該問(wèn)題你 會(huì)設(shè)計(jì)一條什么班規(guī)?(3) 你認(rèn)為班規(guī)會(huì)帶來(lái)什么影響?
【寫(xiě)作要求】
1.作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。
2.作文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。
范文1：
According to the above passage, we know when Sally found there were so many problems among her new students, she didn’t lose heart. She made some rules full of love and respect to “manage” her students. In return, her students took on a completely new look.
When it comes to my class, I have to say that I can’t stand some classmates’ selfishness. They like to study on their own. They won’t help the others, so I explain to them that when you help the other classmates, you can also revise the knowledge at the same time and you are sure to benefit from it. Besides, every student may have different weak and strong subjects, so they should learn from each other so that they can have more advantages than disadvantages. Thus, I urge to make it a rule to learn from each other, hoping that they will learn more knowledge and make more friends by helping each other.
I hope every student can make great progress by cooperation. In the same class, we are brothers and sisters.
譯文：
根據(jù)上面的文章，我們知道當(dāng)薩莉發(fā)現(xiàn)在她的新學(xué)生中存在很多問(wèn)題時(shí)，她并沒(méi)有失去信心。她制定了一些充滿(mǎn)愛(ài)和尊重的規(guī)則來(lái)“管理”她的學(xué)生的。作為回報(bào)，她的學(xué)生們呈現(xiàn)出了一個(gè)全新的面貌。
至于我的班，我不得不說(shuō)我不能忍受一些同學(xué)的自私。他們喜歡獨(dú)自學(xué)習(xí)，他們不愿幫助別人。所以我向他們解釋?zhuān)?dāng)你幫助其他同學(xué)時(shí)，你也可以同時(shí)復(fù)習(xí)知識(shí)，你肯定會(huì)從中受益。此外，每個(gè)學(xué)生都會(huì)有不同的強(qiáng)弱科目，所以他們應(yīng)該互相學(xué)習(xí)，這樣他們的優(yōu)勢(shì)就會(huì)大于劣勢(shì)。因此，我強(qiáng)烈要求將互相學(xué)習(xí)成為一個(gè)規(guī)則，希望同學(xué)們能學(xué)到更多的知識(shí)，并通過(guò)互相幫助來(lái)結(jié)交更多的朋友。
我希望每個(gè)學(xué)生都能通過(guò)合作取得很大的進(jìn)步。在同一個(gè)班級(jí)里，我們是兄弟姐妹。
范文2：
Confronted with the misbehavior of her new class, Sally emphasized the idea of “we are family” and afterwards worked out 10 rules to regulate the students’ behaviors. Amazingly, she earned respect from her students, all of whom later grew to be confident, considerate and well-behaved.
The most obvious problem with our class is lack of interaction or teamwork. Everyone is interested only in his or her own things without paying the slightest attention to the people around, thus giving rise to inefficiency in their study and even putting a limit to the fulfilment of their potential.
To address the issue, I would make it a rule that every Friday a project of a certain subject should be assigned by teachers and completed by every study group consisting of four students. The final presentation on the following Monday will be a result of group work.
From where I stand, this rule will definitely exert a profound effect on students’ academic performance. First and foremost, a harmonious but competitive interaction in a group will help everyone’s learning. Additionally, we can combine our skills and knowledge as well as motivate each other’s greater accomplishments. Last but not least, studying in group, we can share our experiences in solving problems more efficiently. It is for those reasons that I firmly believe that this rule will promote the learning atmosphere and our teamwork spirit.
With continuous efforts, our class, a big family, will compose an extraordinarily harmonious symphony.
譯文：
面對(duì)新班級(jí)同學(xué)的不良行為，薩莉強(qiáng)調(diào)“我們是一個(gè)大家庭”，然后制定出10條規(guī)則來(lái)約束學(xué)生的行為。令人驚奇的是：她贏得了學(xué)生們的尊重，他們后來(lái)逐漸變得自信、體貼、表現(xiàn)良好。
我們班學(xué)生最明顯的問(wèn)題是缺乏互動(dòng)和團(tuán)隊(duì)合作。每個(gè)人都只管自己的事，從不注意周?chē)娜耍瑥亩鴮?dǎo)致學(xué)習(xí)效率低，甚至他們的潛力也受到限制。
為了解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題，我將制定一條規(guī)則：每周五某一科老師應(yīng)當(dāng)給學(xué)生布置一項(xiàng)任務(wù)，這項(xiàng)任務(wù)由四名學(xué)生組成的學(xué)習(xí)團(tuán)隊(duì)來(lái)完成。最終將會(huì)在接下來(lái)的周一公布團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的結(jié)果。
從我的角度來(lái)看，這項(xiàng)規(guī)則肯定會(huì)在學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)方面發(fā)揮重大而深遠(yuǎn)的影響。首先，在一個(gè)團(tuán)隊(duì)里，和諧而有競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的互動(dòng)對(duì)每個(gè)人的學(xué)習(xí)都會(huì)有幫助。此外，我們可以把我們的技能和知識(shí)結(jié)合起來(lái)，彼此激勵(lì)以取得更大的成就。最后但同樣重要的是，團(tuán)隊(duì)學(xué)習(xí)可以更有效地分享我們解決問(wèn)題的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。正是基于這些原因，我堅(jiān)信，這個(gè)規(guī)則將會(huì)提升我們的學(xué)習(xí)氛圍和團(tuán)隊(duì)精神。
在我們的不斷努力下，我們的班級(jí)，我們的大家庭將會(huì)譜寫(xiě)一曲非常和諧的樂(lè)章。
范文3：
Sally was a teacher who taught some students full of problems. The students didn’t follow the school rules. Therefore, she made the rules for them. Later they made great progress.
In our class, some students don’t work hard and often fight with each other. I will tell them some stories about hard-working people. I will make a study plan to encourage them to study hard. I put up some sayings on the walls to remind them to do so. I will explain to them that studying hard is very important. They aren’t allowed to fight at school. In this way, students have a good habit. Most of the students follow the school rules and study hard. They will respect teachers and other classmates. They will have good manners and confidence. Later they will get better grades.
譯文：
薩莉是一位教一些有問(wèn)題學(xué)生的老師。這些學(xué)生不遵守校規(guī)。因此，她為他們制定規(guī)則。之后，他們?nèi)〉昧撕艽蟮倪M(jìn)步。
在我們班上，有些學(xué)生不努力學(xué)習(xí)，經(jīng)�；ハ啻蚣�。我會(huì)跟他們講一些有關(guān)勤勞人們的故事。我將制定一個(gè)學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃來(lái)鼓勵(lì)他們努力學(xué)習(xí)。我把一些諺語(yǔ)張貼在墻上來(lái)提醒他們這樣做。我將會(huì)向他們解釋努力學(xué)習(xí)是非常重要的。他們不允許在學(xué)校里打架。通過(guò)這種方式，學(xué)生們有了一個(gè)好習(xí)慣。大多數(shù)學(xué)生遵守校規(guī)和努力學(xué)習(xí)。他們會(huì)尊重老師和其他同學(xué)。他們會(huì)有好的舉止和自信。以后，他們會(huì)取得更好的成績(jī)。
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