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        【精選】英語作文合集十篇

          在日常生活或是工作學(xué)習(xí)中,大家一定都接觸過作文吧,作文可分為小學(xué)作文、中學(xué)作文、大學(xué)作文(論文)。你知道作文怎樣才能寫的好嗎?下面是小編幫大家整理的英語作文10篇,僅供參考,歡迎大家閱讀。

        【精選】英語作文合集十篇

        英語作文 篇1

          高考英語滿分作文

          Dear Bob,

          I’m so glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here. I’ve already found you a house near our school. I’d like to tell you something about it.

          You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School. The house is near the school. It is about 25 square metres. In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window. You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom. The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen. So you may cook by yourself. The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month.

          Hope you’ll enjoy staying here!

          Yours,

          Li Hua

          滿分理由

          本文內(nèi)容具體,詳略得當(dāng),表述方式很有創(chuàng)造力和新意,長短句并用,語言結(jié)構(gòu)富于變化,錯落有致,順暢圓潤,尤其是情態(tài)動詞和分詞的運用很獨到,為文章增色不少。

          作文:

          Dear Bob,

          I’m glad to hear from you.

          Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you.

          The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.

          It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.

          Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I’ll try my best to help you.

          Yours,

          Li Hua

        英語作文 篇2

          一、宏觀性評價

          1. 整體印象類評語

          Super!Excellent!Perfect!Wonderful!Fantastic! Marvelous!

          采用整體印象類評語對于起始階段的學(xué)生有較好的激勵作用,但若千篇一律德使用此類評語,就會使學(xué)生無法正確認識自己的寫作水平,最終導(dǎo)致教師的評語失去應(yīng)有的作用。

          2. 規(guī)范導(dǎo)知類評語

          Beautiful.Clear. Wonderful.Good hand-writing.

          You'er careful of using pronounciation.

          Glad to see your improvement in handwriting.

          I'm expecting clearer/more beautiful hand-writing from you next time.

          YOu'd better pay more attention to word order.

          Better be more careful of your spelling.

          It's important to compose a draft beforhand.

          3. 情感調(diào)控類評語

          I appreciate your handwriting.

          You have a good knowledge of English proverbs.

          You are quite aware of making meaningful sentences.

          You are richer than others in collecting and using typical sentences and idioms.

          I'm expecting greater progress from you in writing. Come on.

          If you need my help, never hesitate to come to me.

          警句:

          Hard work leads to success.

          Not to advance is to go back.

          No one is without faults.

          Keeping is harder than winning. Keep it up.

          二、微觀寫作技能方面的評語

          1. 專項點撥類評語

          It's proper to use the proverb in Para.2 Quite clever.

          You are good at using attributive clauses in your writing.

          The "struck" sentence is perfectly used.

          You'd better use "third person" in the first para.

          It's good to use the past tense in your writing.

          2. 佳句欣賞類評語

          教師可以在句尾統(tǒng)一標(biāo)注贊美性的符號(如E--Excellent)或標(biāo)識不同星級等。

          What a wonderful sentence using "cover".

          It's really clever of you to use this beautiful sentence.

          The inverted sentence is well written.

          3. 謀篇布局類評語

          A good beginning. A perfect ending. Well-organized.Perfectly-expanded.

          The first para. makes a good beginning.

          The last para. makes a perfect ending.

          All the points have been covered.

          It's clever of you to use a topic sentence at the beginning of a para.

          It's wonderful to use proper conjunctions between sentences.

          You are good at developing a para.

          You have made great progress in developing a passage.

          I am glad to see the sentence conherence in your last para.

          Better pay more attention to the relationship between sentences.

          It's really wonderful to start/end your sentences with adverbials.

          在起始年級應(yīng)側(cè)重對學(xué)生寫作行為規(guī)范的引領(lǐng),重在對學(xué)生進行詞句方面的引導(dǎo);對高年級學(xué)生則應(yīng)側(cè)重對文章的結(jié)構(gòu)、行文的邏輯、句子的變化等方面的指點和引導(dǎo)。

          雖然這些評語對我們大部分學(xué)生來說不太適合,因為他們連老師評他們什么都看不懂。但我們平時對作文的批改確實沒做到這么仔細。有很大啟發(fā)!

        英語作文 篇3

          Nowadays, a new style homework correcting appears in school which has become a hot point under discussion. We usually get a mark tick for right answer and get a cross for wrong, but things has been changed, educator use “o” for “x”, which makes the correcting more gentle. As to this new type correcting, there is no consensus agreement among people.

          現(xiàn)在,校園里出現(xiàn)一種新型的作業(yè)批改方式成為了人們討論的熱點。我們通常是做對打勾做錯打叉,但現(xiàn)在改了,教育學(xué)家用o代替x,這讓種方式更加柔和一點。對于這種新方式,人們的看法不一。

          People who agree with this new style homework correcting hold the views that our educational method should be gentle. The child’s mind is not mature enough, teachers should choose a more acceptable way when they are correcting student’s homework. Such as an “o” is softer than an “x”. Because in our mind, “x” represent absolutely wrong, on contrary, an “o” means “you should think twice, there is a better answer waiting for you to find out”. It could lead on a student to correct his answer without hurting his feels.

          同意這種新方式的人認為我們的教育模式應(yīng)該溫和一些。孩子的心智還不夠成熟,老師應(yīng)該選更加容易讓人接受的方式去批改學(xué)生的作業(yè)。例如o就比x溫和一些。因為在我們的心目中,x代表了絕對的錯誤,相反,o意味著“你應(yīng)該三思,還有更好的答案”。這能在不傷害孩子的感情之下讓他改正錯誤。

          However, some people think that if we always use a gentle way to teach students, how could we develop the student’s ability to face the error and frustration. There is a reason for educator use “x” for wrong answer, students should have the courage to face the error that they made, and they should remember why they do it wrong.

          然而,有些人認為如果我們總是用柔和的`方式去教育學(xué)生,那我們怎么培養(yǎng)他們面對錯誤和挫折的能力?教育學(xué)家用x批改錯誤的答案是有理由的,學(xué)生應(yīng)該有勇氣去面對他們犯下的錯誤,還有他們應(yīng)當(dāng)記住為什么他們會做錯。

          Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the former one. I think once student has accepted their error, they will voluntarily to correct. Otherwise, students see an “x” and their defensive mechanisms automatically come up.

          權(quán)衡以上兩種觀點,我傾向于前者。我認為一旦學(xué)生接受了自己的錯誤,他們就會自愿地改正。否則,學(xué)生一看到x就會自然而然地產(chǎn)生一種抵觸心理。

        英語作文 篇4

          Learn to Be Grateful

          Nowadays, quite a few college students lack conciousness of being grateful. They turn to take such things for granted, as parents supporting them, teachers helping them, and waiters serving them. They are even mean to say Thank you to others. This phenomenon has caused great attention from the whole society.

          The following reasons can account for the lack of gratefulness conciousness. First of all, unsound family education plays an important role. Many parents turn to pay too much attention to children's academic performance, but ignore their value orientation. Moreover, schools don't input enough time and money in moral education. Besides, nowadays, college students get so much love that they are insenstive to others' care and help.

          Considering the seriousness of the problem, it is high time to take effective measures to strengthen college students conciousness of being grateful. First, parents should improve self-quality and influence children by their own behaviors. Second, our society and schools must increase input in moral education, and try to build the atmosphere of being grateful. Finally, we college students should learn to express our gratefulness to people around us, just beginning from the simple Thank you.

        英語作文 篇5

          This summer holiday, I had travelled to Hong Kong with many other students. We went to Hong Kong by plane. Hong Kong is very small, but there are many people living there.

          In Hong Kong, all of the buildings are very tall. There are lots of shops there and you can go shopping until about 11:00 at night. In Hong Kong, things are very expensive, so we only bought a few souvenirs.

          We went to lots of places, such as the Avenue of Stars and Ocean Park. I like Ocean Park best. The park is very big. Sitting in the cable car, you can see two hills, lots of different flowers and the sea. Some students were afraid of sitting in the cable car!

          We stayed in the Shu Ren College. There are many big trees around it. We had meals in the restaurants, but I didnt like the food.

          Hong Kong is very beautiful. I like Hong Kong and I hope to go there again some day

          中文翻譯:

          這個暑假,我和許多其他學(xué)生前往香港。我們乘飛機去了香港。香港很小,但有很多人住在那里。

          在香港,所有的建筑物都很高。那里有很多商店,你可以購物直到晚上11點左右。香港的東西非常昂貴,所以我們只買了一些紀(jì)念品。

          我們?nèi)チ撕芏嗟胤?如星光大道和海洋公園。我最喜歡海洋公園。公園非常大。坐在纜車,您可以看到兩座小山,很多不同的鮮花和大海。一些學(xué)生害怕坐在纜車!

        英語作文 篇6

          there are so many people under the unbearably high pressure in china. heavy work demands and intense competition pile enormous pressure on the individuals who desperately try to pursue a more well-paid salary and push for a higher position. for students, eam pressure makes them overburdened and overwhelmed. stress is a personalized phenomenon but confronts everyone at different degrees.

          this phenomenon divides people. some have a depressing and gloomy attitude toward the physical and mental strain. so stress is always blamed for someones mental disorder, violence and even suicide. in contrast to their negatively reacting to stress, others may face up to the mounting pressure and keep a ecellent mood.

          how to properly and effectively cope with the huge pressure? first, people under the tremendous pressure can select a proper way to rela, such as pampering themselves with a long hot bath and immersing themselves in the favorite cd. repetitive tasks and no break will propel people to pay a hefty health price. second, the over-high epectations leading to the strong strain must be lowered. third, a chat with close friends is a favorably good way. talking to them will alleviate enormous pressure.

        英語作文 篇7

          一、英語書信的常見寫作格式

          開頭部分:

          How nice to hear from you again.

          Let me tell you something about the activity.

          I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.

          I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.

          I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.

          結(jié)尾部分:

          With best wishes.

          I’m looking forward to your reply.

          I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.

          二、口頭通知常見寫作格式

          呼語及開場白部分:

          Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.

          正文部分:

          All the teachers and students are required to attend it.

          Please take your notebooks and make notes.

          Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.

          Please come on time and don’t be late.

          結(jié)束語部分:

          Please come and join in it.

          Everybody is welcome to attend it.

          I hope you’ll have a nice time here.

          That’s all. Thank you.

          三、議論文格式

          1.正反觀點式議論文格式

          導(dǎo)入:

          第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (導(dǎo)入話題)

          Our opinions are divided on this topic.(觀點有分歧)

          正文:

          第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方觀點)

          Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3個贊成的理由)

          第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方觀點)

          Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3個反對的理由)

          結(jié)論為:

          第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(個人觀點)オ

          2.“A或者B”類議論文格式:

          導(dǎo)入:

          第1段: Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.

          正文:

          第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(贊同A的原因)

          第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2個B的優(yōu)勢)

          結(jié)論為:

          第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出結(jié)論) オ

          3.觀點論述類議論文格式:

          導(dǎo)入:

          第1段:提出一種現(xiàn)象或某個決定作為議論的話題

          As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的觀點是贊成還是反對)

          The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (過渡句,承上啟下)

          正文:

          第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3個贊成或反對的理由)

          結(jié)論為:

          第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照應(yīng)第1段,構(gòu)成"總—分—總"結(jié)構(gòu))

          4."How to"類議論文格式:

          導(dǎo)入:

          第1段:提出一種現(xiàn)象或某種困難作為議論的話題

          正文:

          第2段: Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3個解決此類問題的辦法)

          結(jié)論為:

          第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(強調(diào)解決此類問題的根本方法)

          四、圖表作文寫作格式

          The chart gives us an overall picture of the 圖表主題. The first thing we notice is that 圖表最大特點 . This means that as (進一步說明).

          We can see from the statistics given that 圖表細節(jié)一 . After 動詞-ing細節(jié)一中的第一個變化, the動詞-ed+幅度+時間(緊跟著的變化) . The figures also tell us that圖表細節(jié)二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (進一步描述).

          Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (結(jié)論). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (給出原因). / It is high time that we (發(fā)出倡議).

          五、圖畫類寫作格式:20xx年高考英語作文萬能

          1.開頭

          Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...

          2.銜接句

          As we all know, .../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.

          3.結(jié)尾句

          In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...

          高考英語作文總結(jié)萬能模板句式

          1) ……in general/above all/with the result that/as a result/consequently,……

          2) As far as I am concerned/as for me,……

          3) This truth above seems to be self-evident.

          4) Whether we examine the ……above,such things can happens anywhere anytime to anyone.

          5) In my point of view,I like/prefer A much more than B.

          6) I still prefer A,however,for they teach me not only to be ……but also to be…… ,both in ……and in……

          7) There is no doubt that……

          8) In order to make our world a better place in which to live we should efforts to……

          9) To a large extent,……,therefore,reflects……

          10) If all above mentioned measures are achieved,……

          11) Wherever you are and whatever you do,……is always meaningful.

          12) So clear/evident/obvious it is that there are quite different opinions on it.

          13) Now,which one do you prefer——the one……or the one……? Were it left to me to select,I should not hesitated a moment to choose the former/latter.

          英語四級作文萬能模板范文:關(guān)于留學(xué)

          Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Studying Abroad. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

          1、目前很多中國學(xué)生出國留學(xué),

          2、出國留學(xué)的好處,

          3、我的看法。

          Nowadays, going abroad for studies is enjoying a striking popularity among adolescents. Importance should be attached to studying abroad.

          There are a great many advantages of studying overseas. First and foremost, living and studying abroad offers students a different perspective of the world. On a university campus, international students are likely to encounter their counterparts from various countries and areas and are exposed to perse ideas and values. What is more, overseas experience is the best opportunity for the real-life use of foreign languages. There is no better opportunity to improve second-language skills than living in the country in which it is spoken.

          Generally peaking, it is my view that although going abroad is expensive and perhaps painful, the payoff is worthwhile. In the first place, in addition to knowledge, overseas students can gain precious experiences that those who stay at home will never have. Furthermore, overseas experience, frustrating and painful as it may be, is conducive to the growth of adolescents.

          如今,出國留學(xué)在年輕人中間非常流行。應(yīng)重視留學(xué)。

          有許多優(yōu)勢,海外學(xué)習(xí)。首先,國外生活和學(xué)習(xí)的學(xué)生提供了一個不同的世界觀。在大學(xué)校園中,國際學(xué)生很可能遭遇來自不同國家和地區(qū)的同行和接觸不同的理念和價值觀。更甚的是,國外的經(jīng)驗是現(xiàn)實生活中使用外語的最好時機。沒有更好的機會來提高第二語言技能比住在鄉(xiāng)村,它說的是。

          一般來說,我認為,盡管出國留學(xué)是昂貴的,也許是痛苦的,回報是值得的。在第一個地方,除了知識之外,留學(xué)生可以獲得寶貴的經(jīng)驗,那些呆在家里。此外,海外經(jīng)歷,因為它可能是令人沮喪和痛苦,有利于青少年的成長。

        英語作文 篇8

          在忙碌緊張的考試過后,同學(xué)們終于迎來了期盼已久的暑假生活,同學(xué)們在這個暑假里都去了那些名勝古跡游玩呢,下面這篇初一(七年級)暑假英語作文,供大家參考,希望同學(xué)們能夠把自己游玩的感受用英語寫下來與同學(xué)們共同分享.

          This summer vacation I got a part-time job in a snack bar. At the beginning, I couldn't do well at all often made mistakes. I was very low-spirited,father mother encouraged me a lot. So I began to try my best. Gradually, I could do a very good job. I felt very excited when I received my pay for the first time. I already made up my mind to find another part-time job in this winter vacation. I believe I can do better next time.

          翻譯:

          這個暑假我在一個餐吧里得到了一個兼職。開始,我經(jīng)常出錯做不好工作。我有點意志有點消沉,父親母親都鼓勵我。所以我盡力做到最好。漸漸的,我可以把工作做得很好。當(dāng)我收到工資我感到很開心。我已經(jīng)有信心在這個寒假找到另外的兼職了。我相信下次我可以做得更好。

          初一英語作文:暑假英語作文--The Summer Holiday

        英語作文 篇9

          Once upon atime ,there was a very old man .He is Yu Gong .There were two mountains near his house .They were so high and big that it took a long time to walk to the other side .The Yu Gong his family they should all help him to move the mountains.But his wifi told Yu Gong that he could never do it .Yu Gong and his children began to move some of the earth an stone to the sea .One day ,a man saw Yu Gong and his children when they were working on move the mountains.He told Yu Gong that he could never to it because he was old and weak ,As soon as the man finished talking ,Yu Gong said that his family could continue to move the mountains after he died .his family would live and grow ,but the mountains could not get bigger .So Yu Gong and his family kept on digging day after day and year after year .Finely ,a got was so moved by Yu Gong that he sent two gods to take the mountains aways .

        英語作文 篇10

          In my eyes, my mother is the most beautiful woman in the world. She has typical Asian features: yellow skin and black hair, but what catches the attention of people is her eyes. Her eyes are as clear and bright as the night sky, and whenever she smileds, they would glow up and shine like a million twinkling stars. Nobody could possibly stay angry or depressed under such a smile, and even a heart of stone would crumble under her shine.

          She is also the gentlest person alive. Once, when I scraped my knee by accident, she flew like a wirlwind to my side, and took out a piece of alcohol swab to clean the cut. It stung like I was being bit by a bee, so she started blowing the red rash on my knee. The light gust of wind coming out of her mouth soothed the pain, and suddenly I had the courage to stand up again. I looked up into her eyes, eyes filled with concentration and gentleness.

          I love my mother for all that she has given me, and I love her for ever.

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