我認識的一位怪人
Is he really so frightening? Does he look like a beast or does he ever behave mad? On the contrary, he looks moderate, and he only likes sleeping in class. But that's the problem! Tortured by terrible rhinitis, afflicted by lasting headache, discriminated against by teachers, and worshipped by other foresighted souls,he remains a mystery. Why? You may ask. The answer lies in two aspects, his words and his achievements. He always boasts himself to be an extraordinary man, reaching up to the so called "fourth" level that only A. Einstein and Dr. Freud have attained. He says when he was only 15 he could see through the sophisticated society, he could tell the true meaning of life which had puzzled generations of philosophers, he could understand the universe and the essence of natural laws, and he could, in his words, "feel" the world, or to be more exact, "perceive" the world. And he also feels that as time goes by, with increasing association with the numb and blunt, his intuition and wisdom are fading Words are not that terrible. See what he has done. He neyer stays clear minded in class, and seldom finishes assigned homework, but was able to win a second prize in the national 0lympic contest of biology and achieve pretty high score in the NMET without hard work. He is now still living in his own fantasy. Genius or kook,only time can tell.
簡評作者生動地描述了身邊的一個怪才，從兩方面表現(xiàn)了此人的'與眾不同之處。首先是他出人意料的豪言壯語，其次是他輕而易舉取得的好成績，勾勒出一個自視甚高，但確有聰明才智的張揚少年的形象。如果作者能在文中增加一些行為舉止的描寫，該怪才的形象會更加豐滿。作者較好地運用了一些排比句型(parallel structure)，如第二段中的Tortured by terrible rhinitis，afflicted by lasting headache，discriminated against by teachers，and worshipped by other foresighted souls，he remainsa mystery．和第三段中賓語從句的并列，使文章讀起來朗朗上口，增強了感染力。但文中有幾處意思表達不清楚。如第一段中the mere mention Of hisname among his classmates including me，still conveys some kind of chilliness secretly through everyone' heart like a steel needle讀來非�；逎蝗绺臑閠he mere mention Of his name inspires awe among his classmates including me。第四段中Wordsare not that terrlble．到底是什么意思?不如表達得更明確一點：What he has done is even more unexpected．(點評教師：趙蓉)
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